I'm blaming the cold for any real lack of forward momentum in my writing - as opposed to my just feeling somewhat slack and seriously lacking in any real inspiration (only half this sentence is true - guess which half! Hint: Take out everything between 'blaming' and the second instance of 'my').
I did manage to wrap up a draft of my New Bedlam submission. I'm now going to let this sit until I've read the next issue (due out the beginning of next month) before I decide on the next move. Jodi Lee, you'll be pleased to know it looks to be coming in within the short fiction guidelines. Working title "The Grass is Always Greener..." - yep, I'm a tease.
A side note. I have a requirement to write the whole name of the editor of The New Bedlam Project as my wife has the same name, with the same spelling. I know they both read the blog, so to save confusion, my wife is Jodi, and my friend is Jodi Lee.
Now, moving on...
I read and reviewed Jeremy C. Shipp's debut novel and now have his collection of short stories in my bag to do next. After reading Vacation, I had one major thought in mind - Ben should read this, so Benjamin Solah - go and buy this book. It's right up your alley.
And next...
Alan Baxter (author of RealmShift and MageSign), has posted an excellent bit of webtrickery (TM) about importing blog posts to other areas. I've managed to follow the first bit and reproduce this blog onto FaceBook so that space is no longer just sitting there doing nothing. Hopefully I'll be able to the same to other spaces currently acting as place holders for the Brenton Tomlinson or MusingsOfAnAussieWriter brands.
Lastly...
I received my final assignment back for Module 1: Write for TV and Film. In way of background for all of you coming late to this topic, and for my copious amount of new readers on FaceBook, I have just completed semester 1 for my second year in an Advanced Diploma of Art in Professional Writing. Each semester I am required to submit 8 assignments. So far this semester I have received the following grades: B, B, B, B, B, C, C - and the final grade - insert drum roll here - was another B! All together, this gives me a Credit for this module - which I think is pretty much the standard mark. It should be a pretty good mark (the levels being pass, Credit, Distinction), but it doesn't seem so, which is part of the reason I'm leaving. I won't open up that whole thing again - this post is probably long enough already.
So that was my weekend. I hope yours was filled with all sorts of awesomeness and sparkles (you have a lot to answer for Carrie).
Monday, June 22, 2009
Quiet Weekend
Tuesday, June 16, 2009
Back On Track
Then I'm thinking of sending it off to The Way of the Wizard anthology - see previous post.
A couple of my ideas for The New Bedlam Project have gelled together so things are beginning to hot up in my head. For a change, I started with the end (Aaron will be pleased), and now have cause and effect, but I'm trying to nail down a beginning in my head which makes sense, is believable and fits in with the whole New Bedlam feel that I've read so far. It'll come...
In the mail today I received two things. An assignment, which only managed a C grade and has so many comments all over it I'm amazed it didn't cost them extra in stamps due to the weight of ink, and a couple of books.
The assignment I'm not overly fussed about. I may read the comments, I may not - it doesn't matter at the moment because I've already sent in the remainder of this semester's assignments and then that's it - I'm done for the time being with study.
But the books...today I've finally seen some words I wrote in an actual book. A real one with a flash looking cover and pages and black ink and everything. Only downer is it doesn't have my name on the two stories within it :c(
Yeah, it's my two erotica stories in the British anthology "The Mammoth Book of Erotic Confessions" Friday, June 12, 2009
Last Piece
I received the last of my feedback on my sample chapter today. This in turn allowed me to knock off the final assignment of semester 1.
I need to go buy a new printer cartridge over the weekend (although I could print it out at work come Monday if it comes to that). The due date for final assignments is 24th of June, so I've once again finished well ahead of schedule, even though I took three weeks off in the middle of the semester.
I'll now be considering my options and investigating whether I should bother continuing with the study route. I'm not inclined to do so currently. We'll see.
Still no word on my short listed piece. Hopefully sometime tonight.
Now - to see if I can put together something for The Awesome Carrie Harris and the Zom-Com Contest (Yes the capital in Awesome is intentional - I'll try anything to suck up to the judges)
Swirls
Last night I finished my revision of Swirls In Obsidian. It has been renamed Arcanum due to all the changes which have been made and sent out to my wonderful group of beta readers.
I did this while rebuilding my oldest daughters laptop and while continuing to wait on tender hooks for any word from the editor I'm currently working with.
Alas, the laptop is rebuilt, the revision is complete, I even managed to get halfway through NT # issue 6, but still nothing from the editor. I don't blame her for it or hold any grudges. I'm sure she has more than just little old me to work with in getting this book together to the extremely high standards this particular publication is known for.
Tonight I have more real work to do. Sunday I will be once more at my day job doing overtime. Sunday night I'll be putting together my last assignment for submission sometime during the coming week. I must also finish reading NT6 and read New Bedlam 1 before the weekend is done so I can make a dent in my review work.
You just know my slush reading for this month will arrive in my inbox any day now...
As for the previous discussion on writing courses. I am in no way saying people shouldn't do it. I am suggesting there may be better ways to achieve the same results, but courses do provide the structure some people need, and they definitely provide the much needed piece of paper to allow one to move into some writing professions. I suggest that if you are going to do a writing course, you first look at doing a short English grammar course to get the basics right (unlike me), and then research any long time course carefully. Ask around, post a question, be sure. Know what you want out of it and ensure that is the minimum you attain.
And good luck.
Thursday, June 11, 2009
Up For Discussion
Anton provided this link to an article in the New Yorker discussing the merits of creative writing courses. It's a long article, but worth the read,I think. (Thanks, Anton)
It seems to be centred on mainstream literary fiction, and it seems to argue against itself with the evidence it presents, but it does touch on some home truths, the main one being that creativity can not be taught but it can be encouraged, and this is what I think creative writing courses at all levels are endeavouring to do.
I'm becoming a little disillusioned with my course because I'm not learning a great deal and it's not inspiring me to write more or better. This may have something to do with not fully trusting some of those teaching me.
When I do modules on screen writing, or writing articles - things I'm not naturally lured towards, then I focus more because I'm learning new things. When I'm doing modules on writing short stories or on writing the novel, I'm not learning so much because I've learned much of it over my growth as a writer over the last three years or so. That's not to say I learn nothing, but I do have to sift through a lot of chaff to get to the good stuff.
So does this make writing courses not worth the Latin inscribed parchment you get from them?
I think that depends on where you're at in your writing journey and what you're aiming to get out of the experience.
Creative writing courses will not make you a writer. They will give you tools to add to your writing toolbox, some you will keep, some you will adapt to your own needs, and others you will discard, but at least you will learn of their existence and be able to make decisions about them.
They can give you a sense of community in a profession which is mostly a solo affair, and writers need each other, but a blog like this one or joining a writing group does the same thing - and probably does it better.
It can prod you into producing work. This isn't always quality work due to the time constraints placed on you, but it does give ideas you can work on outside the course framework. Of course your time is so taken up with doing assignments and reading, you have seriously reduced time to follow up on those ideas, and by the time you do, often the spark of inspiration has died and you tend to discard those once flaming gems.
The dream of writing for a living is dying. I'm becoming, sadly, more in tune with the idea of writing only because I want to. I've always wanted to, I just wanted my cake and to eat it as well. Now I'm happy enough to get my work published and track my career as it moves through better quality markets which may one day equal better pay, but it will 'probably' never be enough to live on. Still, a nice bonus occasionally is a good thing.
So do I think creative writing courses are a good thing?
For new writers, for people who, like I did back in 2006, suddenly decided to start writing, then doing a six or twelve month writing course could put you on the right path, but I would suggest doing an English class at that point would be more beneficial.
When you get to the point of submitting work to market, then it may be useful, but then putting the butt in the chair and writing is as useful if not more so. Finding writers who are better than you and who are willing to share their wisdom, help you learn, and pass honest judgement on your work, is infinitely more useful.
As you progress into more focused work in the longer courses such as the four year one I'm currently doing, you will dedicate more time producing a single work which is a good thing, but then with everything you've done with other writers outside the course structure, you'd be doing this anyway and with a better base of opinions to offer guidance rather than a single mentor who you have been paired with - someone you didn't pick and who you still have to learn to trust.
If you're doing the course for the other modules to expand your knowledge across all possible writing careers, then you're diluting your creative juices and this is not a good thing. Decide on what you want to do and put your energies into that.
Creative writing courses may teach you some technical parts of the writing process. They may encourage you to produce work and move forward with your art, but they cannot teach you to be creative.
My advice is to take an English course as early in life as possible and become good at using the words you intend to be creative with, and then get out and experience life. Take note of the world around you and encourage your inner child to make up scenarios about the things you see.
And then write - a lot. Read a lot as well. Seek out writers who are better than you. Your goal is to learn from them and eventually surpass them, unless they are just as focused and then you should all rise together. Critique other people's work and get your own done as often as you can.
Spend some time as a member of Critters (or similar large critique group) where you will read a lot of work. You need to read the good and the bad. You need to be able to pick the difference at ten paces so you won't make the same mistakes - or at least be less likely to :c)
Unless a specific job you're aiming at requires you to have that Latin coated piece of dried and pressed wood, then don't bother. There are better ways - in my opinion (and experience).
What do you think?
Wednesday, June 10, 2009
A Quiet Day On The Writing Front
I've done zero writing today until I began this post.
I've done zero reading.
Had lots of meetings at work so that kept me more than busy.
I did receive an assignment back! Another B grade. I'm seriously considering not continuing this course. I've learned more about writing in the last week from my secret editor than I have in 18 months in the course - that's sad.
I've also updated all the market links and news at AHWA so if you're a member don't forget to head along and check it out for all your Australian and dark fiction markets - oh, and I've added The New Bedlam Project to the database ;c)
And that's it.
So much for Mr Busy who doesn't sleep.
Good luck with your submissions.
BT
Sunday, June 7, 2009
Still Reading
I'm still working my way through my reading.
I managed to submit assignment 8 for the film based module so that one is now complete. A C grade will get me a credit.
I'm working on the last assignment for the novel writing module so the end of the semester is well in hand.
I've also been asked to do a revision for one piece I currently have out which TOTALLY blew me away. It's my biggest market to date so I'm suddenly very anxious. If it wasn't for the steading influence of my private super editor, Pharosian, I'd be pulling my hair out by now. A beacon by name and by nature. Thank you Pharo.
So the sudden adrenaline rush and chaos of continuos revisions put my weekend schedule a little behind. Out of the 25 stories in Atrum Tempestas, I'm currently up to number 19. Our very own Danielle Ferris is only another three stories away. I shall get there tomorrow (it's now 1am so that would mean later today).
I also want to finish reading the NT back catalogue and read New Bedlam before the weekend is out. Monday will be helping the little one with a project and getting some work done around the house - if the rain holds off.
That's it from me for now - time to go watch the Socceroos.
Monday, June 1, 2009
Semester Just About Done
The current assignment I'm working on has been a doozy. Create and smooth out a query letter for a novel I'm still writing. Create a synopsis for that same still-being-constructed novel and make sure the two combined don't equal more than 1500 words.
Easier said than done.
And finally add a sample chapter - well, that was easy enough. Which one of my 23 already written chapters would you like to see?
The query is kind of done. I'll gain more insight and loads of goodness when the Query Ninja has at it, but I think it's good enough for the assignment. I've also done the synopsis, which I think is poor - still. It doesn't flow as I would like , but not getting bogged down in detail and including all the relevant bits will take time. I think stepping away from it for a bit and then revising will be worthwhile, as will feedback from others. Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time, so it may have to go as is. The chapter, as already stated, is done.
So this assignment is just about ready to go out the door. I feel a huge amount of sympathy for the other students in this course. At the meet and greet at the beginning of last year, very few of them admitted to being up to their armpits in trying to write a novel. If they haven't gotten seriously stuck in before this semester began, I can see them ready to hit the self destruct button by now - I was almost there about a week ago and I already knew a lot about this industry.
Now the final assignment looms on the horizon--well the final two assignments. The script has been done and is waiting for the lecturer to open up electronic submissions, but the novel writing assignment requires I find some willing readers. Thank you one and all for jumping up and down and offering, but I've already got my three in mind and will be sending them emails shortly explaining what I need and asking if they'd be willing to help out. Spread the love, or don't ask too much of too few is the catch phrase here - otherwise known as don't wear out your welcome...
And all these assignments are coming to an end just in time.
Today my reading-for-review books arrived.
On my immediate to read pile over the next 8 weeks are (in no particular order):
Sheep and Wolves by Jeremy C. Shipp
Vacation by Jeremy C. Shipp
This is not a Game by Walter Jon Williams
Ravensoul by James Barclay
The Grave Thief by Tom Lloyd (No, I haven't read the first two)
Two Jeff Lindsay books concerning Dexter (One of the books contains three stories, the other arrived in a police evidence bag - cool!)
Grants Pass Anthology (already reviewed by 'my pick for the fan writer Ditmar', Chuck. The man is a machine when it comes to reading and churning out excellent reviews. I've started reading this one already so my pale imitation of a review should be available soon. Psst, so far I agree with Chuck, this is very good!)
So, the chaos that is my writing life continues.
Oh, and lastly: David Such has written a program to help us all produce wonderful pieces of fiction. Head on over to his blog and download the beta release of his exciting new product called FlashWRITER and give it a go. You'll be able to supply feedback and give input to create exactly the type of writing program you want. No more excuses about Microsoft or any of the other Office-type programs out there not being able to do what you want. If you're not part of the solution, you're part of the problem. Go and have a look and at the very least, say hello and congratulate him on a monumental effort in producing this very professional looking program.
To be honest, I'm not sure how many testers David is currently after, but it can't hurt to go over and ask if you're interested.
That's it from me for tonight. Email requests going out shortly and then I'm going to get some reading done.
Saturday, May 30, 2009
Things I Hate
Query letters: although I'm getting the hang of these the more I work at it. In time I think these will just be something else I need to do.
Synopsis: if I write until I'm 103, I will never get the hang of this. I've read all sorts of advice; I'm still trolling through websites looking for a better way.
I need to produce a synopsis of AKL of 3-5 pages in length. Currently my synopsis stands at 7 pages! It doesn't yet include all the Aboriginal flavour I want, it doesn't have all the passion and romance I want, and it doesn't have the plants for the paranormal in the first half of it because I haven't done that yet.
This assignment, and this synopsis in particular - sucks!
And I still have a sample chapter to polish and send with them yet...
I hate, I hate, I hate...
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Worthwhile
On Monday I went into town. While there I had a follow up appointment with the back specialist - I need to seriously start an exercise regime - organise a student ID card - so I can get into Conjecture next month on the cheap - and visit a book shop for some research.
I was very proud of myself for not buying anything, even though I visited three book shops!
I needed to locate where my book, AKL, would sit on the shelf so I could pinpoint the type of book I'm writing in regards to genre, and to help me better describe it when talking about it with other interested parties - you know, agents, publishers, and the like ;c)
It was a bit of an eye-opener.
Is my book historical fiction? Yes. It takes place in colonial Australia back in 1839 with fictional characters in a real time and place, and with real events of the period happening around them.
Is it paranormal? Yes. It involves European superstitions of the time, Aboriginal Dreamtime legends, and a malevolent ghost.
Is it romance? Yes, but not so much. My protagonist falls for one man, who betrays her and later she falls for the right man, but this isn't the main focus of the plot or theme. There is a fair bit of underlying (and mildly graphic) sex and passion which breaches the surface on a regular basis to firmly place it in the adult reading sphere.
Is it literary? Yes. The plot centres around a young woman's struggle to survive in an inhospitable climate and against a male dominated society. So the quintessential coming of age/finding one's place type of story.
So I have a paranormal historical romance novel??? What???!!!
While at the book store, I took note of other historical novels. 'The Potato Factory' by Bryce Courtenay; 'A Kingdom for the Brave' by Tamara McKinley; 'Nindra' by Dianne Holding - just to name a few.
AKL is a little like all of these, but with more. In many instances, that more is the paranormal element. Currently, my story wouldn't have a final Act without the paranormal bits. The first two Acts were written pretty much without any paranormal input (I'm waiting to write the last bit so I can go back and do plants (layering). The first half works without it, but a story isn't a story without an ending (as Aaron has so neatly pointed out here). In other bits, my use of sex is more prominent (re: graphic) than many other historical novels.
So how to define my book succinctly? Carrie Harris, as part of the Query Ninja Project (if you haven't checked this out yet you definitely should), puts some great advice on the table to help with this. Unfortunately, my assignment, which started this round of thinking about query letters, asks me to name the genre my book fits into. Personally I like the idea of painting a picture of the book with enough detail that the genre is fairly obvious to any agent/publisher who reads it, but I can't side-step this assignment requirement.
In my real-world query, I'll paint the picture and let those in the industry, who should be better at it than I am, decide for themselves.
So that leaves me with the assignment. How do I nominate a genre for this book? A hard question as I haven't fully finished writing the first draft, and none of you have read any of it, but any suggestions on how I can narrow this down, at least for the assignment, would be appreciated.
Does anyone else have this difficulty?
Tuesday, May 26, 2009
Interesting Times
Assignment 6 for the novel writing module went out the door this morning. Last night I commenced work on assignment 7.
This will be interesting and highly beneficial.
I need to create a submissions package to a fictional (at least I think it's fictional), publishing house. Strangely, my course seems to highlight the course of submitting directly to Houses rather than to agents inside Australia. Through my research, this seems bunk advice but then nobody is twisting my arm to follow it so as long as I pass, I don't care. If any other writer taking this course is silly enough not to do their own follow up research then they don't deserve to get on the publishing track anyway. Harsh - yes, but true.
So, last night I began drafting my query letter for AKL. It still needs work and yes I'll be paying a visit to the Ninja Query, but a few things have already hit home. I've managed to get the first paragraph pretty much done as per the guidelines in the assignment. I'm then to move into the spiel about the book, which I've done - and I sat back and thought, gee, it sounds like a pretty interesting book - why doesn't the one I'm writing have all that in it?
In part, this is because I'm still writing it, because it's a first draft, and because I know there are bits I have to go back and add/edit/expand/kill. But overall, it's a little depressing to find I haven't penned the story I imagined so long ago.
Still, I must remember that it is still only the first draft.
After the query is done, I need to write the synopsis. Anyone know where I can find a Synopsis Ninja? And then do a quick polish on the first chapter and submit the lot. Some time this week or early next - joy.
In other news, Wamphyri was rejected again overnight. I need to reread it and closely consider my next move with this one. Anyone think of a paying market for a vampire story (which isn't a YA romance) off the top of their head?
Sunday, May 24, 2009
Assignments Everywhere
Well, this weekend didn't go to plan, but then, they very rarely do.
I didn't get to the tiling in the bathroom - again.
I didn't get to do much more than read a single chapter of AKL. No new words - again.
No reading - again.
No acceptances or rejections - again.
I got back marks on two assignments for my script writing and was kind of perplexed. Using the lecturers feedback, I edited a previous assignment and got strange comments back about not liking it - I guess she forgot what she said the first time round. Anyway, I got two C's, completely breaking the run of B's, but it doesn't matter. I couldn't get a distinction and unless I completely fail the final assignment (which would require me to resubmit anyway), any grade will get me a credit. Anything from a pass up will make me happy. So the two returns get a shoulder shrug from me.
I've also finished assignment 6 for the novel writing module. As predicted, I've used the rape scene to show mood and to make life easy for me to explain what emotions I'm trying to elicit from the reader or show through the characters. The good part of this selection is it is the end of Act one, so it shows the lowest of lows for one character and the end of a character arc for another. So I'll print this out sometime tomorrow and send it off.
No work tomorrow. I need to go into to town and get a whole heap of things done. Doctor's follow up, book store visit (I'm going to try and not buy anything), and I'm applying for a student ID card. Now that's funny, a 41 year old bloke with a student ID card, it feels like I'm a 16 year old with a fake ID - nobody will buy it.
Now, it's time for some sleep. I did a heap of overtime at work today, so I'm pretty pooped at looking at computer screens all day.
Speak soon.
Thursday, May 21, 2009
Another Assignment Done
So far, so good. Most of my prep work for my project is fitting in around me instead of the other way round.
Today, while three servers were being built, I managed to knock off assignment 7 for my script module and assignment 8 was done last week (I'm waiting on the lecturer to catchup again now). So this module is done. Cool! And it looks like another credit in the bag. Double cool!
That leaves me three assignments to do on the novel writing module and about six weeks to do them in, I think.
The 100 worder has been done and tucked away. Necrotic Tissue is closed to subs until July :c(
I figure I'll be able to wrap up this semester, get a good chunk done on AKL, and then worry about a submission for NT when reading opens (or perhaps get cracking on one just before it opens).
So while I wait on these servers. I think some more reading is in order. NT issue 5 anyone?
Sunday, May 17, 2009
Sick
Stepping down from my soapbox...
With thanks to JT and Cate for spreading the virus around to all bloggers. I've spent the last two days battling with disgusting things trying to escape from my body - and I think the major battles are still to come - joy.
Okay, so maybe my daughter had some influence with me becoming sick, but it sounds better to have been transmitted through cyberspace...don't you think?
I did manage to drag my sorry ass to the computer a couple of times and get some work done. Another assignment went out the door last night, and in an effort to find my 750 word piece for another assignment, I started reading the first draft of AKL. Some of this stuff I haven't read for over six months.
Result: I've written some bits quite passively, other bits are a little slow, but I quite like a lot of it. I know I still have to go back and add in the supernatural clues in the early bits, but that will happen once I finish the first draft. I'll then go back and do the layering.
I was able to do some additions as I read through today, but mainly I started a must remember to do list, like researching a type of wildlife, like renaming ships and characters, like finding loose plot points which need tying up that I'd forgotten about, and a whole bunch of other stuff.
I managed to get through the first 11 chapters. Only 12 more to go. I've earmarked a couple of passages which may be useful for the assignment, but I still haven't gotten to the big action scenes I wrote earlier this year. If worse comes to worse and I start running out of time, I can revert to analysing another authors work - I've read some great stuff recently so this would be the easy option. Still, I'd like to be able to use my own.
Even if I wasn't sick, I'd be working from home tomorrow. I have a huge amount of project reading to do and initial plans to draw up for my real job. So some time of an evening is all I'm left to work with on my writing. I am not a morning person. If only I could win lotto - but lets not open up the writing full time argument again...
;c)
Regardless of when, how much, or what you write - I wish you all the very best in your writing endeavours.
Thursday, May 14, 2009
Good Boy
Today was a good day, and very indicative of why I'd love to be a full time writer.
To begin with, my little girl is on the mend. A day of rest seems to have done her the world of good.
I promised to get some assignment work done today, so after we returned from the doctor's office, I got my little one some lunch, set her up in front of the fire and the TV with her quilt in place, and got stuck in.
The results:
Script Writing Module
Assignment 6 - draft 90% complete. Just need to reduce a four page treatment to a three page treatment. Not sure what a treatment is? Think synopsis with more focus on characters emotions and motivations - and just as hard to write. I've manged to write a one page synopsis and a one line synopsis.
Assignment 7 - draft 50% done. I needed to take my painstakingly written six page script (remember that one), transfer it from the script writing software to a MS Word document in preparation for editing. Of course it lost all the formatting so I had to fluff around with that. It is now ready to be redone, this time with no length limitations so it can be done properly. I also need to take into account the lecturers comments on the six page script and incorporate them (brownie points).
Assignment 8 - final 100% complete. I found I could not write the synopsis and treatment without writing the actual script - so I did. Of course I can't write a script without first having the story written out in prose form, but I was lucky there. This is all based on a story I already had. Cool.
Novel Writing Module
Assignment 6, 7, 8
I've read all the assignment requirements and I'm now gathering them together.
For assignment 6 I need to present a 750 word extract from AKL which will provoke a strong emotional response from readers - the rape scene should do that. I then have to provide an excerpt from someone elses novel which has a specific mood and discuss that in less than 250 words. That should be simple. I've been using Alexandra Sokoloff's 'The Harrowing' for this purpose to this point. I already know which section I'll be providing.
For assignment 7 I need to produce a submission package for a fictitious publishing house. This I haven't looked into yet, but it could be a challenge.
For assignment 8 I need to produce critical feedback from three people on at least a sample chapter of AKL. It also states it should include feedback on any other sections I've already written as well, but as I'm over halfway, I wouldn't expect someone to go to that length over a week or ten days that they'll have to critique it. I also need to provide self analysis and what my future intentions with the WIP is to be - the last two bits won't be difficult.
So that's where I got to with today's work. I imagine I should have all my assignment work completed by June or very soon there after. Now i just need to do some work on a couple of sample chapters to bring AKL up to scratch.
Tonight I'm doing some overdue slush reading.
Here's hoping you had a productive day with your writing endeavours as well.
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Night Off
Last night was one of those strange beasties who only come along once in a very long while. I didn't get on the home computer. Yep, I did nothing related to writing at all - not even reading.
I spread out on the bed and watched a couple of episodes of Top Gear, and a double episode of The Tudors. I then watched Fragile with my wife - so I guess you could say I did a little research by watching a horror flick - and pulling it apart as we went. (Not a bad flick, but the best part was the acting of the young girl who plays Maggie. Her facial expressions are amazing to watch and totally believable, which is amazing in itself for one so young)
This morning I found a response from my six page script. After all that struggling, guess what grade it got? Yep, another B. I've submitted 10 assignments this semester. The latest is still out. Of the nine returned, I've received one A and eight Bs. Consistent...
Today, I started work on editing 'Worth The Wait' - and quite like where this is going. Only a few tweaks here and there and she'll be ready for others to see. Strangely while working on this, I suddenly realised I had a plot hole in Spoilt Rotten that nobody else has picked up on yet. I don't have my USB key with me so I'll fix it when I get home.
I have parent/teacher interviews with the lad's teachers tonight - that will be an interesting exercise.
After that, I need to start on another assignment and get that out before the end of the week.
Saturday, I'm hoping to fit in some work on AKL - around the tiling which needs to be finished this weekend. At l;east I don't have any new short stories kicking the inside of my head at the moment.
Sunday, May 10, 2009
Another Assignment Done
Assignment 5 for my module concerning my AKL manuscript has been done and will go into the mail tomorrow morning.
This week I also intend on doing one or two more assignments so I can get back in front on that side of things. Two months ago, I was so far ahead it was scary, so I allowed myself some time to just veg and let other students catch up. It's taken me another two weeks to get back on track and into the flow.
I have six assignments in total left for this semester. That's both modules combined. I think I have about seven weeks left to submit them in. I hate running things close to deadline so it's time to put in a burst.
I still haven't done anything about a new short story - although it's not for the lack of trying on my brain's behalf. I still have this nagging thought about the Festive of Fear anthology. I've been given a lead and now my brain keeps throwing up possible ideas. So far, they've all been so much crap. Little more than offal to mulch the garden with. But I've been in this situation before. When I was trying to think of something for The Blackness Within Anthology. I was also in this situation with this year's AHWA flash and short story competitions, and again with this year's PARSEC competition. I struggled for weeks with half baked ideas while I churned out some 20,000 words on AKL. I'd posted that I wasn't going to enter as nothing was coming to mind.
And then bang, bang, bang! I wrote three short stories in a week or two. And then a few weeks later, the idea for God's Piscatorial Church jumped up as I watched my computer power up at work.
I'm half hoping nothing comes up in the next two months for Festive Fear, but you just know something will.
What is your best non-writing related exercise which will almost guarantee you a new idea for a short story? Walking, hiking, fishing, driving, yoga, sex - inquiring minds want to know...
Wednesday, May 6, 2009
Highs & Lows
Today I received an assignment back from Kirsty Brooks, my lecturer for the module concerning my AKL manuscript. So far this year, every assignment (in both modules) has gathered a B grade. Today, my assignment reached an A.
It contained excerpts from AKL which got very positive feedback, so I was over the moon.
Time to get to work and knock off the remaining assignments for this semester.
In other news, I received a rejection back for Spoilt Rotten - but a nice rejection. Apparently the editor has had few in a similar vein. He did remark that it was well written, but I'm guessing it wasn't the best of a large bunch (my assumption, not his). With two months to go before deadline, I do have a lead on another story, but I'm guessing I won't be the only one with that lead either...and I don't want to write a new short right now.
I've finished plumbing the new vanity unit and the silicon has firmly attached the top to the carcass. Only some tiling and painting left to go in the bathroom - two jobs I don't particularly enjoy. Still, renovations are moving forward which is a good thing.
My day job has started to seriously ramp up. Two projects I've been after for years have been approved within a day of each other. Today I had the pleasure of spending tens of thousands of someone else's money. Next week begins probably a solid three months of work.
The bad point here is the influx of projects will completely kill my writing time at work. This will, in turn, increase my need for writing time at home, meaning less time for anything else. That won't fly, and I don't blame my wife or kids for not allowing it. I can be obsessive with my writing to the point of spending six hours a night, every night, at the keyboard.
So, there will be less writing done over the coming months as life gets in the way. That's okay. I know what's coming so I'm prepared for it.
I have no new stories currently under way. I do have a couple outlined and sitting on the sidelines waving at me, and there's the lead to replace Spoilt Rotten, but I refuse to commence work on them (currently). The Salisbury Writers Festival and associated competition is fast approaching as well, but it looks like I'll be missing it this year - the contest that is, not sure about the festival - have to wait and see what the program has in it.
I need to concentrate on assignments and AKL. My initial deadline for AKL was the end of next month - 7 weeks away. I'm approximately 48,000 words short of finishing it. It's NaNoWriMo over two months instead of one, but I know I won't make it - but I will get close.
Starting now...
Monday, May 4, 2009
Thank You
With everyone offering suggestions, getting work published so I had new and cool stuff to read, and putting up inspiring posts or interesting stuff on their blog - it was only a matter of time before I hit the right combination of inspiration and perspiration - and found my six page script.
Yep - it's done!
It shall be sent off tonight.
And it's only Monday. So much for that week long goal ;c)
What's next...
Friday, May 1, 2009
Well And Truly Stuck
I need help.
This six page script is kicking my arse. I've converted three stories over to scripts so far. All of them are well over six pages and don't make sense if I cut them down. Unfortunately they are all well below the 15 page script I need for the final assignment so the whole lot of them have been a waste of time!
I've gone through a bunch of anthology listings looking for inspiration and nothing has lurched out at me.
What I need: a single scene so I only have to write one setting paragraph (I can work with two at most). Preferably with no more than three characters (two is preferable).
I am to make my characters believable - duh!
I need to clearly demonstrate their wants and needs - duh!
Conflict should be clearly evident - duh!
Show motivation - duh!
Natural dialogue - double duh! But not too much. Less is more.
Must be surprising and entertaining - they don't want much do they...
So this is my cry for help. Suggestions are more than welcome. I need a premise; a situation; a prompt. I'm willing to entertain anything except erotica and KBB - sorry Nat.
Go into as much or as little detail as you care to. I need to have this done by the end of next week - I didn't even know I had a deadline.
From what I've done so far, I think it needs to be a story that can be told in one or two scenes, and no more than 1200-1500 words
With the lack of sleep and pain, and all sorts of other stuff going on, I've just hit a blank wall. Scary.
Thank you in advance for any and all suggestions and comments.
BT