Today I've been researching characterisation. Well, for the last few days I've been researching characterisation and it's thanks mainly to an old bellboy in the film 'Somewhere in Time'.
Allow me to explain.
The leading lady, played by Jane Seymour, is a wonderfully full and complex character, as is Christopher Reeves character. Even the bad guy, who really only has the young starlets best interests at heart, played by Christopher Plummer, is a full and interesting enough character that the viewer manages to gather enough emotion to not really like the guy and hope he comes to a foul end. It's probably the most wooden of all the characters who have a speaking part - or that could be Christopher Plummer (he's pretty much the same in The Sound Of Music as well).
And then there's Arthur Biehl, played by Bill Urwin (young Arthur played by Sean Hayden). He is one of those characters who does very little in the film and yet manages to endear himself to the viewer. He's simply there to join the past with the future in a quaint way that shows how nice Christopher Reeves character really is. And yet I remember that character almost as well as I remember the main three.
That's what I want to be able to do, write characters people will remember.
Then I realised that Richard Matheson wrote the novel and the screenplay. Bugger me. One of the preeminent horror writers of all time, and I love his time travelling love story. Still, not a bad person to want to emulate - one day.
So, in my quest for writing a better character, I thought back to what I know worked in the past. The best stories I think I've written so far have all had lots of research behind them. That research has led to an easier time of it when it came to weaving a story. It comes back to that adage of 'writing what you know'. If you don't know, go research about it until you do know, and then write.
So I set about getting to know my characters. I've done an 11 page dossier on my main male character. It's not as bad as it sounds - it's pretty much a list taken from, and added to, the original found here at Epiguide.com. It's not finished. I'll add to it as I go, but it's a good starting point.
At the end of it, I decided my character hadn't acted correctly in the first three chapters. Something needed to be done. So I wrote a new first chapter, moved some things around and I'm now much happier. I'll let things settle a bit before I have another look over things.
I've also been scouring the web for pictures of my people. I've pretty much got pics of all my characters except my female lead. For her, I have 11. They are all different women and yet something within them captures what I see my lead being. She will be complex and complicated to live with - and she's not even the POV character.
Many of you have been throwing up excerpts from your current WIP - I'm afraid I won't be doing the same. Nothing leaves this study until it's been revised at least two or three times and then has the stamp of semi-approval from Pharo and my Beta readers. When I think it's worth reading, then I'll start sharing outside this select circle.
I won't throw up a new word count, I'll save it for next Wednesday - that way it'll look like I've managed something during the week...
That's about it for now - back to reading...
Friday, July 31, 2009
WIP
Thursday, July 30, 2009
Quick Market News
A new anthology has opened for submissions: I'm looking at you JT - I'm thinking you may very well have something for this...
For everyone else, if you have a story on a ship, go have a look.
Two Bits Of Good News & A Frustrating Turn Of Events
Last night I was notified of being short listed for a publication - we won't jinx things by saying which one, and this morning I hear Michael Schumacher will be returning to Formula One to fill in for the injured Felipe Massa!
I followed Michael's career from day one and have been a fan ever since. The last two seasons have been a little strange without him on the grid and I've only just started to come to grips with it, and then he goes and does a comeback.
As a Ferrari fan, I was all for Kimi's second place last weekend, but as an Australian, this year I'm more barracking for Webber.
Rumour has it that Alsono is coming to Ferrari next year which will make me stop and reassess my loyalties (I don't like the guy). With Webber at Red Bull, and I've found I quite like Vettel as an up and coming driver, maybe Alonso's arrival will be the catalyst for a switch.
This would be only the second switch of my allegiance in nearly 30 years of following the sport. I started out following Alan Jones back in 1981 but didn't really pick a team until the mid 80s. Remember Lotus when they were painted black with the gold sponsorship logos on them and driven by the legend that was Ayrton Senna.
When Lotus pulled the pin, I followed Senna as a driver, not really interested in the teams he drove for, but more how he as an individual performed. McLaren, Williams, where ever - it didn't matter. I just enjoyed watching a master at work.
Then along came Schumi and I recognised his greatness as soon as he stepped into the Jordan. I began to watch both Michael and Aryton with interest and surprisingly came down on the younger man's side of the fence when they looked to begin going head-to-head.
And then Senna was killed while driving a Williams. A sad day.
So I followed Michael, and then he set up shop at Ferrari so I did as well. But now my thoughts are turning to Webber, and to watching young Vettel blossom as a driver. I want Mark to win the championship this year. Brawn may have hit a brick wall and don't have any money with which to continue developing the car. Their title fight could well and truly be over.
Mark only has a few years left and has struggled in under performing machinery for most of the years behind him. He has earned a chance at the the title. Vettel will have many more years ahead of him challenging and winning titles. This year, I want to see Mark become only the third Australian to win the F1 Drivers Championship behind Sir Jack Brabham and Alan Jones.
But enough of the long-winded exposition on my love of F1 - back to writing.
I've written the first three chapters of my current work in progress and yesterday I decided I didn't like the way the relationship between my two main characters had started out. The conflict was only internal to my central character. I think it can work better with a slight change of attitude from my main man. That will give him an external and internal conflict, add character depth, and give me more fodder for a little later in the story and a bit for later in the series (yep, I'm planning crap that far in advance).
I also had a rethink on three secondary characters. At this point in the book, I've introduced a total of seven characters. Only my central female character hasn't changed. I've had a rethink on all but two of the rest and their time will undoubtly come.
Time to stop and get everybody set in concrete in my head. Time for the character dossiers to be created. After writing three chapters this pause is somewhat frustrating, but still, it's better than continually rewriting chapters because I decode to change the character.
So this week will see no advancement on the WIP. Work will be done on all characters. Next week will be rewriting the first three chapters, and the current outline will require revision.
And then we can move on.
Must get all of this reading out of the way a well...
***Late Update***
This is just pure Gold!
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
Links
She's new to the blogging world, and extremely funny - The Intern. (Thanks to Editorialass for showing me the path) This is her take on an editorial meeting: What really goes on in editorial meetings is a lot like what goes on when a bunch of girlfriends go out shopping for clothes. Many acquisitions can be boiled down to one fundamental question: Does This Make My Boobs Look Good?
Thanks to Helen Ginger, I now have a new appreciation for the Web, and a slight glimmer of a future plot point for my current WIP with this article from the BBC. :c)
The Mammoth Book of Best New Horror is now open for submissions - check it out.
Thinking about including a horse in your story - Check here first.
Good advice from Toni McGee Causey on creating worthwhile secondary and tertiary characters. (Something I'm concentrating on at the moment)
A review of a 'Field Guide to Writing Flash Fiction' has been posted over at How Publishing Really Works which sounds like it could be a useful resource book.
Most writers who've been at it for a while (at least a year or more) have heard all this before (if they've been researching the industry - or have been a regular visitor here), but I'm not sure if I've heard it put quite so well as this over at Murder by 4. The included rejection quotes are a wonderful tonic every writer should remember as well.
And Holy Cow! Has anyone else seen this postover at Hoyden About Town, personally, I only found it by randomly clicking on links in other people's blogs, but anything which delivers an indepth look at Labyrinth, the movie, and close up pictures of a young Jennifer Connelly (I had such a thing for her in the 80s - not so much now she's had all 'that work done'), can only be a good thing.
WIP Wednesday
Two things to note this week. I bumped my target word count up to 50K. I've been thinking about secondary character development and them having their own story arc. I don't want to go down the road of having a well-rounded main character and then 'the girlfriend', 'the bully', 'the clueless teacher', 'the bad guy', etc. Yes, characters who fall into these types of categories will be involved, but I want them, all of them, to be so much more than that. I want all of these characters, even the bad guy, to be characters the reader will have a strong reaction to, not just a blah - cardboard cliche type of response toward. That will take more words as the story becomes driven by more than just one or two characters.
Second thing to note - I only managed 2452 words this week (and I finished off the long winded review of Dexter). I'm spending a lot of time reading, and I'm spending time just chilling, watching the box, playing the DS, etc. Unfortunately, I'm also doing a lot more work at work - how rude is that! Still - moving forward :c)
Tuesday, July 28, 2009
Update to Alan's Tour
Alan Baxter is the author of the dark fantasy thrillers RealmShift and MageSign.
RealmShift has been described as “inventive”, “action-packed”, “thought provoking”, “a novel I am loathe to put down”, “fast paced and full of vibrancy”.
MageSign has been called “a fast-paced ride through a visceral reality which holds a mirror up to today’s apathetic society” (by me), “a fast paced supernatural adventure that will leave readers rethinking how they view the Cosmos”, “…a gritty tale of blood rituals, mystery, and mysticism… grabs hold of the reader and doesn’t let go.”
Both books are available from indie publisher Blade Red Press in multiple formats at multiple locations:
Print editions from Amazon.com
RealmShift
MageSign
Kindle editions from Amazon.com
RealmShift
MageSign
Print editions at Amazon.co.uk
RealmShift
MageSign
Muliple format ebooks from Smashwords.com
RealmShift
MageSign
For the duration of the blog book tour (until July 29th) you can get the Smashwords editions of both RealmShift and MageSign for just US$1 each.
To get your special priced copies all you have to do is enter a discount code at the checkout. This will change the price from the usual US$3.50 to a special price of US$1.
RealmShift enter code ZR95S at the checkout; for MageSign enter SF97B at the checkout.
You can also contact the publisher directly at http://www.blade-red.com/
Learn all about the author, read Alan’s blog and read lots of free short fiction, a novella and the first three chapters of both RealmShift and MageSign at Alan’s website.
Alan Baxter Blog Tour Day Nine
over to Alan Baxter. He's promised me he'll be gentle and keep things ultra informative.As part of my blog book tour promoting RealmShift and MageSign, Brenton asked me to write a post about indie authors for his day of the tour. I thought I’d give a brief outline of how I see indie authorship as it is today and where I see it heading in the future.
Firstly, some clarifications. Indie authors are essentially self-publishers, but there’s a lot more to the concept than that. There was a time when a self-publisher was someone that paid a fortune to have a few hundred copies of their book printed and then tried to get those copies sold wherever they could. More often than not those people were left with boxes of unsold books and a burned experience of being a writer.
Indie writers these days are so much more and have so much on offer. In the first place there is technology now that removes the need for expensive advance print runs. Print On Demand, or POD, technology means that a writer can upload their book to a site dedicated to self-publishing and that site will then work with a printer to make that book available. When someone buys a copy of the title from the POD site (or Amazon and other online retailers) that printer produces one copy of the book and sends it out. Only copies that are bought get printed. Companies exist now that are purely there to facilitate this function for authors. A lot of small and independent presses, my own included, use this technology to keep production costs down.
Then there’s the current rise of ebooks. Electronic books and electronic readers, such as the Amazon Kindle, are starting to become mainstream. Before long ebooks will be a normal part of reading. Already my books are selling better in Kindle editions than any other format. And self-publishing ebooks is even easier than using POD.
Naturally, the advent of easier self-publishing has led to more people taking advantage of the opportunity and the market has become flooded with a large amount of crap. Self-publishing has always had a stigma attached and it is well deserved. The vast majority of self-published books are truly awful. Not only are the stories bad, but the production, the editing, even the type-setting is just terrible.
Here’s another place that the indie authors try to separate themselves. Indie authors like myself recognise that we need to compete with the trad houses on every level. POD companies can produce a book indistinguishable from anything else on the shelf, but it’s up to us to use that technology properly. Good indies will get someone in to design a quality cover if they’re not much cop at graphic design. They’ll have their book proof-read and edited by someone other than their mum. They’ll rewrite, edit and polish until their story is really worth publishing. And they’ll pay people (editors, etc.) to do it if necessary because that’s the right thing to do to produce a competitive product.
Obviously the nature of indie publishing means that you’re trying to keep setup costs down, but two things that should really fill your budget are cover design and editing. Often you’ll find other indie that have skills you can use. Perhaps you can trade your graphic design skills for someone’s editing skills. Join a writers’ group, in real life or online, and help each other out. Otherwise, spend the money. There are a lot of author service companies out there these days and they’re often good value. Shop around, compare prices, negotiate. And do as much editing and proofing on your own as you can to give them less to do. The less they have to do, the less they’ll charge for their work. If there’s one thing I try to drill into indie authors it’s this: If we’re going to shake off the self-publishing stigma, we must produce good looking, well edited books. Indie doesn’t mean doing everything on your own.
However, one point I should make very clear – there are a lot of nasty people out there running scams that prey on desperate writers. Be careful who you give your money to when it comes to getting help with your production. Research a lot, inform yourself, talk to other indies. A great place to start is publetariat.com, which is jam-packed with information.
And then there’s the marketing. The biggest hurdle of all. Writing a book is the easy part. Producing a quality product isn’t so hard any more and there are a lot of people out there that can help you. But marketing it is the real difficulty. Again, technology comes to our aid.
Just making your book available won’t encourage people to buy it. They won’t even know it exists. There are literally millions of books available on Amazon. What makes yours so special? Well, with the use of social networks like Twitter and Facebook and with a well designed, quality website as an online hub, an author can begin to build a profile for themselves that will draw the attention of readers and get the author’s work noticed. It takes an incredible amount of work and time, but it can be done.
If you do want to be traditionally published, then best of luck to you. It can happen. But it’s not necessarily based on how good you are as a writer. It’s a lot to do with luck, timing and the current writing zeitgeist. Going the indie route is not easy, takes a huge amount of time and effort and you’re unlikely to ever be considered a bestseller by anyone’s standards. But it can be done and it can be fun. I’m having a great time producing my own work and selling it, and it’s starting to sell quite well comparatively. I still seek traditional publishing, particularly in short fiction, and I’ve had a fair amount of success there. I love that too. I’m a writer, an author, and this is what I do. I’m slowly getting my small independent press up and running and I hope to offer the indie author opportunity to other writers, taking some of the hard work out of the game for them.
This article is really just an overview, scratching the surface of what’s out there in the way of opportunities for today’s authors. But just as the music industry and the film industry saw a small number of indie artists rise to prominence and become mainstream in their own right, I see indie authorship as doing the same thing over the next few years. It’s going to be a fun ride.
Monday, July 27, 2009
Interesting YA Facts
(Don't forget about Alan Baxter's blog tour - we're up to day 7 already. Only two more days till his guest appearance here.
Don’t forget that for the duration of the tour (until July 29th) you can get ebook editions of both RealmShift and MageSign for just US$1 each. This is an offer exclusive to Smashwords. The beauty of that is that Smashwords offer the books in a variety of formats, including Kindle friendly .mobi editions. (If you're lucky enough to have a Kindle...)
To get your special priced copies all you have to do is enter a discount code at the checkout. This will change the price from the usual US$3.50 to a special price of US$1. Go here for RealmShift and enter code ZR95S at the checkout; go here for MageSign and enter SF97B at the checkout.)
But this post isn't about reminding you of things wonderful and adult fiction related...
I've still been pondering the lengths of novels in different YA categories. As many of you have pointed out, if my current WIP finishes at 40-45K, some agents may consider it a novella. If I over expand with a new subplot or ten, then some agents would consider over 80k to be too long.
As an aspiring novelist, we should be looking to remove as many hurdles as possible - writing the damn thing in the first place followed by all the revision, editing and rewriting is hard enough, you don't need to be cutting off your nose to spite your face in regards to finding someone to sell it when you're finished.
So, I figured I'd try and find out what the norm is and an easy way to keep that information up-to-date. General consensus is somewhere between 40-80k will have an agent, somewhere, willing to have a look, but I want to narrow that range so we have a greater chance of success.
Firstly, regardless of the numbers you come up with and how long your beloved masterpiece is, always check individual agents/publishers guidelines to see if your manuscript meets their requirements.
Now, exactly how long should that manuscript be?
Over at Modern Matriarch is an article discussing this topic. The important bit of information here is this:
So how do you determine which length is suitable for your book?...Find five or six books within your books genre, and then follow this simple formula:
Book pages x lines on a full page x 9 = number of words
To simplify this further - a standard size mass market paperback has around 36 lines of text per page making your formula: Number of pages x 36 x 9
For example:
Fahrenheit 451 - 192 pages x 36 x 9 = 62208 words
Where the wild things are - 48 pages x 36 x 9 = 15552 words
Brave new world - 288 pages x 36 x 9 = 93312 words
How about some more recent titles.
Twilight Book 1 - 544 pages x 36 x 9 = 176256 words!
Harry Potter (1) - 309 pages x 36 x 9 = 100116 words (book 7 has 784 pages!)
What about recent releases from lesser known authors:
Resurrection (Wicked) by Nancy Holder - 416 pages x 36 x 9 = 141264 words!
Totally Fabulous by Michelle Radford - 256 pages x 36 x 9 = 82944 words
So far, all the YA books I've looked at have been what many would consider on the longer side, apart from the classic "Where the wild things are" which only has 48 pages, but then that isn't in a standard format and is more for younger kids.
So lets find some on the smaller end. (Thanks to Jamie for the classics)
Of Mice And Men - 112 pages = 36288 words
Animal Farm - 128 pages = 41472 words
Lord of the Flies - 190 pages = 61560
More recent...:
His name was death - 128 pages = 41472 words
Jade Green - 176 pages = 57024
So, yes - Cate is very correct in her statement that 'a story will be as long as it's supposed to be', and you need to research the agents/publishers so you send it only to those who will look at the manuscript length you've written.
But many don't publish the lengths they're after so I've gone ahead and looked at a whole bunch of recently published YA novels and have come to the conclusion that the range to hit the majority of agents/publishers will be more like 50-65K. (155 pages - 200 pages)
Conclusions:
For those of you who just sit down and write without an outline - just sit down and write - and know that I hate you ;cP
For those of us who need an outline, you need to be looking at around 20 chapters with 2500+ words in each. This should give you something that is fast paced, snappy, and if the content is right, a page turner readers will enjoy.
As an outliner, or a plodder as some people label it, I very much go by the formula Alexandra Sokoloff suggests as part of her story structure technique. With a target of 20 chapters it becomes a simple breakdown of Act 1 being around 8 chapters (first 60-80 pages), Act 2 being around 9 chapters (page 61-125 or 81-170)and Act 3 being 3 chapters (126-155 or 171-200).
Does all this sound like I'm being overly formulaic? Do I sound like I'm trying to make this too much like slot A goes into flap B? Is art something that should not be tied down with such mundane constraints?
I agree, but I also want to be published and these are the numbers the industry is tending to publish. I'm not saying if you write something of 40K (or 120K) that you won't be published - I think I've shown plenty of examples to say otherwise, but the majority of current debut authors in YA fiction are within these parameters and the majority of agents/publishers are requesting to read manuscripts of these lengths.
If nothing else, it's a starting point to aim for.
Make of it what you will...
Sunday, July 26, 2009
The Clouds Part
Ah, finally an acceptance has arrived at my inbox. Demonic Tome has decided to publish my story 'Spoilt Rotten' in the August edition of their online magazine.
A good way to start the day.