tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post8018314171587728337..comments2023-05-30T20:44:13.731+09:30Comments on Musings of an Aussie Writer: Well And Truly StuckBThttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15170193722932454605noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post-53231913983297433132009-05-04T08:56:00.000+09:302009-05-04T08:56:00.000+09:30Thanks guys for the suggestions and welcome Alan.
...Thanks guys for the suggestions and welcome Alan.<br /><br />I had a look at the suicide type scenario - with a twist (of course). I wrote it out and managed to run it to 8 pages :c(<br /><br />I've done a serious edit on it but it still came out at just over 6. Cutting further may really start to affect the story - not happy.<br /><br />Still looking.BThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15170193722932454605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post-24839997338293391532009-05-02T21:07:00.000+09:302009-05-02T21:07:00.000+09:30Oops!
I linked to your blog through your comments...Oops!<br /><br />I linked to your blog through your comments on the story by KC Shaw (not your story as previously noted). <br /><br />What you said was true. I welcome both positive and negative feedback as I want to learn and grow as a writer. <br /><br />There are some out there, though, with "dark clouds" hanging over their heads and seem to take pleasure in raining on everyones parade.Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post-10733474190326781002009-05-02T20:32:00.000+09:302009-05-02T20:32:00.000+09:30I had to do something similar in a creative writin...I had to do something similar in a creative writing class last year (he wanted to touch on plays in one class).<br /><br />We had to come up with a couple of pages describing a scene where a character has a secret. You have to show their intent in their movements about the stage without using any dialogue.<br /><br />My scene was of a women considering suicide. It was over 700 words just Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post-91448983122910543122009-05-02T00:06:00.000+09:302009-05-02T00:06:00.000+09:30When I was in college, I attended a workshop on wr...When I was in college, I attended a workshop on writing one-act plays. We had an exercise where we came up with an idea for one, and mine was awful, so I'm not really the right person to give advice. :)<br /><br />But...how about the aftermath of a murder? Or people expecting a flood and they're trapped in their basement for some reason. Or (on the lighter side) an old couple who hate pets K.C. Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467201304235217944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2300387287801526070.post-75882025368427865802009-05-01T20:09:00.000+09:302009-05-01T20:09:00.000+09:30One prompt I'm using this weekend will be from the...One prompt I'm using this weekend will be from the blog Write Anything - http://writeanything.wordpress.com/2009/05/01/fiction-friday-102/Benjamin Solahhttp://benjaminsolah.com/blognoreply@blogger.com